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Today was a better day than yesterday. Very upset stomach all day yesterday, for no real apparent reason. Bleah

So today went and got groceries, and mixed up some potting soil for the garden.

This afternoon was studio time. The page I’m working on was giving me a hard time. Too much dialog and too many panels. I thought about slitting it into a page and a half, and starting the next scene on the second half of the second page. I didn’t really like that idea. I cut dialog quite a bit, and rearranged panels, and now I think it’ll work. It’s all about story beats and page turns.

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  1. Glad you are feeling better. You have always been a man of few words so I am not surprised that less dialogue works ?

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